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Academic & Research Writing

This guide provides a comprehensive overview of academic and research writing for university students, including the different types of research papers and the CARS model for structuring introductions.

The revision and editing phase transforms your rough draft into a polished, professional academic paper. Many writers find that the real magic happens during revision, where ideas are refined, arguments strengthened, and clarity improved. This stage requires a critical eye and attention to detail.

The Revision Process

Revision means "re-seeing" your work—looking at it with fresh eyes to identify strengths and weaknesses.

Taking a Strategic Approach

  • Allow time between drafting and revising (ideally at least 24 hours)
  • Review for different elements in multiple passes
  • Start with big-picture concerns before details

Content and Organization Revision

  • Check thesis clarity and development
  • Ensure logical flow of ideas
  • Verify sufficient evidence and analysis
  • Confirm appropriate introduction and conclusion

Paragraph-Level Revision

  • Evaluate topic sentences
  • Assess unity and coherence
  • Examine transitions between paragraphs
  • Check for balanced development

Tip: Consider using a reverse outline at this stage. Create an outline from your draft by writing down the main point of each paragraph. This helps you see if your paper is organized logically and if any sections need reorganization.

Editing for Clarity and Style

Editing focuses on improving the language and presentation of your ideas at the sentence level.

Sentence-Level Improvements

Vary sentence structure and length

  • Eliminate wordiness and redundancy
  • Replace vague language with specific terms
  • Convert passive voice to active (when appropriate)

Academic Style Considerations

  • Maintain appropriate formality
  • Use discipline-specific terminology correctly
  • Achieve balance between complexity and clarity
  • Employ objective language (when required)

Common Stylistic Issues to Address

  • Overuse of complex sentences
  • Excessive jargon or technical language
  • Inconsistent tone or voice
  • Insufficient signposting

Example: Instead of "The utilization of methodologies that incorporate participant observation resulted in the obtainment of data that was characterized by increased validity," try "Methods incorporating participant observation yielded more valid data."

Proofreading Techniques

Proofreading is the final stage where you check for surface-level errors and formatting issues.

Systematic Approaches

  • Read aloud
  • Review printed copy
  • Use text-to-speech software
  • Edit from bottom to top
  • Focus on one type of error at a time

Common Errors to Check

  • Spelling and typos
  • Punctuation (especially commas and semicolons)
  • Subject-verb agreement
  • Pronoun reference and agreement
  • Sentence fragments and run-ons

Final Formatting Review

  • Page layout and margins
  • Font consistency
  • Heading styles
  • Citation format
  • Page numbers and other required elements

Tip: Try changing the font, size, or color of your text temporarily during proofreading. This makes the text look different, which helps you spot errors you might otherwise miss.

Peer Review and Feedback

Getting another perspective on your writing can be invaluable for improvement.

Seeking Effective Feedback

  • Provide specific questions for reviewers
  • Request feedback on particular aspects of concern
  • Consider using writing center resources

Responding to Feedback

  • Approach feedback with an open mind
  • Prioritize which suggestions to implement
  • Revise systematically based on feedback

Tip: When asking for feedback, be specific about what you want. Instead of "Can you look at my paper?" try "Can you check if my argument in paragraphs 3-5 is clear and well-supported?"

Next Steps

After thorough revision and editing, your paper is ready for submission! For your next writing project, return to Pre-Writing Strategies.